I wanted to improve the character study for the witch without having to redo all the pieces. The most apparent weakness to me is that in two of the 4 panels the little girl is down in a similar position with her dog. I liked the last one because it shows a nice connection with the characters, so I decided to dump the second one and add this one, which illustrates the moment where she would come in to show her dog what she found. I thought it would only make sense to have the dog startled at her sight!
Here's the full story:
I welcome your comments!
1 comment:
I think you are getting some characterization going here. I love the top one with the startled dog--great action and emotion. I tried to click on the image to read the story but it wouldn't come up. I've been having the same problem with my blog--my images have dead links to the larger image.
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